Creating Drama Everywhere
The stage resembles a box. A fancy Godiva box. This happens in the box -- center. Audience looks from above. Characters are found in space as audience enters.
As the conversation goes by, the characters move toward upstage left -- at the edge of the box.
A: You know, we rarely meet and our conversation is not like it used to be. I miss the old days.
B: ... looks down.
A: Look at you now, my gosh...your creamy complexion. Your radience... So fresh looking.
B: ... blushes and looks away. Moving a step towards upstage left.
A: steps closer I see you're getting fitter. Firmer. You must have been having a great time moving and dipping around.
B: ... smiles shyly, another step towards upstage left.
A: steps closer So, how's it like being in the fancier place? Everyone adores you, huh. You're sucha sweetie and a sport.
B: ... opens the mouth, but no words. Smiles. Looks away.
A: Did I tell you...you look beautiful. Really. I love the way your eyes changes its color...the way your eyes speak to me. And your brows do things I can't do with mine. It's...
B: ... looks at A, then looks away. Steps away...by this time, B is at the edge of the stage.
A: steps closer It's mesmerizing and beautiful. You're lovely...and exquisitely beautiful.
B: ... looks down, looks away.
A: Please say something?
Lights out. Intermission time. Audience may proceed to consume the beverages and Godiva dipped strawberries, courtesy from the producer and sponsor.
13 Comments:
aiyo, u memang 'drama queen' lar! hehe...
huh?! do u like this lil play?
yep... but i think i'll like the intermission more! kekeke...
hahahaha... sure. everybody likes the intermission! who doesn't? :P
man. those are seriously pissed off looking strawberries.
haha...yeah, kinda pissed off from the gentleness.
gentleness? not even an ounce. here's what i think they're saying.
Left Strawb: WHAT MAN! Who said you can use all my face cream!!!!!
Right Strawb: Fuck you lah...I FELL into it alright..think I like looking like THIS issit?
TAMAT.
hahaha...face cream. you make me terbahak bahak ketawa.
eh, don't tamat yet. can continue like this:
Left Strawb: Uh huh? I know you want to be as pretty and wrinkle-free and juicy as me. You jeles. That's why you use MY face cream. and fucking apply it so much you look like you're wearing a Noh mask.
Right Strawb: Fuck you. Sei hoi la lei!
hahaha... so farnee. drama in the audience as well!
ah, yeah yeah. wanna join the drama? continue the dialogue! ;)
erm... dun wan lar. better to leave it as it is, short and sweet (n funny). over-doing it would spoil it...
interesting issue Chi, interesting scripts but not much conflict... or u keep it for the after the intermission part?
but hey, i like it... banyak benda boleh jadi
you're right, art. second act will be out soon. i'll keep you posted ;)
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