Monday, October 10, 2005

Creating Drama Everywhere



The stage resembles a box. A fancy Godiva box. This happens in the box -- center. Audience looks from above. Characters are found in space as audience enters.

As the conversation goes by, the characters move toward upstage left -- at the edge of the box.


A: You know, we rarely meet and our conversation is not like it used to be. I miss the old days.

B: ... looks down.

A: Look at you now, my gosh...your creamy complexion. Your radience... So fresh looking.

B: ... blushes and looks away. Moving a step towards upstage left.

A: steps closer I see you're getting fitter. Firmer. You must have been having a great time moving and dipping around.

B: ... smiles shyly, another step towards upstage left.

A: steps closer So, how's it like being in the fancier place? Everyone adores you, huh. You're sucha sweetie and a sport.

B: ... opens the mouth, but no words. Smiles. Looks away.

A: Did I tell you...you look beautiful. Really. I love the way your eyes changes its color...the way your eyes speak to me. And your brows do things I can't do with mine. It's...

B: ... looks at A, then looks away. Steps away...by this time, B is at the edge of the stage.

A: steps closer It's mesmerizing and beautiful. You're lovely...and exquisitely beautiful.

B: ... looks down, looks away.

A: Please say something?

Lights out. Intermission time. Audience may proceed to consume the beverages and Godiva dipped strawberries, courtesy from the producer and sponsor.

13 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

aiyo, u memang 'drama queen' lar! hehe...

10/10/2005 11:40:00 PM  
Blogger lotsachi said...

huh?! do u like this lil play?

10/10/2005 11:46:00 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

yep... but i think i'll like the intermission more! kekeke...

10/10/2005 11:53:00 PM  
Blogger lotsachi said...

hahahaha... sure. everybody likes the intermission! who doesn't? :P

10/10/2005 11:58:00 PM  
Blogger Spot said...

man. those are seriously pissed off looking strawberries.

10/11/2005 01:43:00 AM  
Blogger lotsachi said...

haha...yeah, kinda pissed off from the gentleness.

10/11/2005 02:45:00 AM  
Blogger Spot said...

gentleness? not even an ounce. here's what i think they're saying.

Left Strawb: WHAT MAN! Who said you can use all my face cream!!!!!

Right Strawb: Fuck you lah...I FELL into it alright..think I like looking like THIS issit?

TAMAT.

10/11/2005 04:37:00 AM  
Blogger lotsachi said...

hahaha...face cream. you make me terbahak bahak ketawa.

eh, don't tamat yet. can continue like this:

Left Strawb: Uh huh? I know you want to be as pretty and wrinkle-free and juicy as me. You jeles. That's why you use MY face cream. and fucking apply it so much you look like you're wearing a Noh mask.

Right Strawb: Fuck you. Sei hoi la lei!

10/11/2005 11:05:00 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

hahaha... so farnee. drama in the audience as well!

10/11/2005 08:58:00 PM  
Blogger lotsachi said...

ah, yeah yeah. wanna join the drama? continue the dialogue! ;)

10/11/2005 09:31:00 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

erm... dun wan lar. better to leave it as it is, short and sweet (n funny). over-doing it would spoil it...

10/11/2005 11:24:00 PM  
Blogger artisticklytouch said...

interesting issue Chi, interesting scripts but not much conflict... or u keep it for the after the intermission part?

but hey, i like it... banyak benda boleh jadi

10/12/2005 12:55:00 AM  
Blogger lotsachi said...

you're right, art. second act will be out soon. i'll keep you posted ;)

10/12/2005 03:26:00 AM  

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